Ice Pond

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This lyric is originally made by myself and I was inspired with the korean musical song of "Ice Pond" by second moon. check this out. Enjoy!

Ice Pond

Ice Pond

Music by: 2nd Moon

Lyrics by: Ryma Houri

 

Lovers are awake to reality,

Feel the sadness in the air;

Coldness of the winter, living in a dream

Confusion is everywhere.

 

Ice Pond is your tears,

Hardly to break it, but inside you’re drowning ill;

Run away from pain, can’t deny from rain

Hold my hand and let us say

 

*Feel the heat of our love

That’s the only way to stay;

Feel the warmth of our trust

That’s the way we stay,

That’s the only way, we’ll see.

 

** Feel the beat of our hearts,

Let the rhythm of love save us from sorrowful doubts

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StandingBear commented on Ice Pond

02-17-2010

I've never had the fortune to hear this song yet to read and enjoy your wonderful poem and to know your inspiration is most impressive.

RymaHouri

02/18/2010

thanks... hope u enjoy reading the War Remembered too? I liked ur poems... cheers :)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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RymaHouri’s Poems (8)

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Desolation 0
" War Remembered" by B.Gillap 1
Ice Pond 1
Wonders of Love 3
Rebel 2
Love 3
Dreams 3
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