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  • 213angel310
  • is a NCE Medical College Student...Lab Tech/Phlebotomist

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I have so mant thoughts an so many emotions
I try an try to express myself
but no one hers me
I can scream and no one will hear me
No one listens
No one cares
People just don't understand
They necer have an never will
"Make the IMMPOSIBLE, POSSIBLE"
Yeah, ok you try
lets see you fall on your ass so hard
and get rite back up
"NOT"
Theres so many qestions an
no where near enough answers
People just don't care
Their caught up in their looks
an have no feelings for others
It's self stipidity
It's not the way you look
It's YOU
Your personality
yopur thoughts
your feelings
Your heart & soul
You emotins
YOU
Image is nothing
If your beautiful on the inside
thats what makes you beautiful on the out side

*~Shay Smith~8
"8-1-2005"

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Prettydec commented on Image

08-23-2009

'Tis an ok poem. The messsage is clear but i think there are a few grammatical corrections you need to make. Adding a few punctuations too will add to the tone of the speaker for a perfect flow. Just my druthers speaking.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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