IN A WHISPER

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    IN A WHISPER

    AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER.....
    THE BEGINNING WAS UNLIKE ANY OTHER
    YOU MADE MY HEART BEGIN TO FLUTTER.
    AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER
    IT FELT LIKE YOUNG LOVE, I WAS WILLING TO WAGE
    AND IN MY BOOK OF LIFE ,YOU BECAME THE  FIRST PAGE
    AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER.
    WE GREW CLOSER AS TIME WENT ON
    WAS 3 YEARS BEFORE YOUR LOVE WAS GONE
    AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER.
    I TOLD ALL THE WORLD JUST HOW I FELT
    NOT KNOWING WHAT FUTURE CARDS WOULD BE DELT
    AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER.
    IF YOU UNDERSTOOD MY FELINGS FOR YOU
    YOU'D KNOW FOR SURE NO ONE ELSE WILL DO
     AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER.
    THEN YOU TOOK ME ASIDE,YOU HAD SOMETHING TO SAY
    I WAS SURE THIS WOULD BE OUR VERY LAST DAY
    AND IT ALL ENDED WITH A WHISPER
    5 WORDS YOU SPOKE,YOU SAID NOTHING MORE
    THEN SLOWLY YOU TURNED WALKING OUT OF THE DOOR
    AND MY LIFE ENDED IN A WHISPER

    Copyright ©2009  Robert Longinetti

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    soulwriter commented on IN A WHISPER

    06-07-2009

    Beautiful heartfelt poetry - divinely revealing and emotionally draining to the point I was reading with mouth a gap, repeating your words in a whisper. Love on, remember always, heal completely - keep creating!

    Madelynn commented on IN A WHISPER

    06-07-2009

    Such feelings and emotion are present with this work.I loved the simplicity and repetition of your statement.It was used well to re-inforce your title and of course,broken heart.i think this work will speak to so many poets of love lost.Thank you for sharing this piece with us.

    Madelynn

    06/07/2009

    whoops-sorry for comment spelling errors.Sometimes get ahead of myself.

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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