Innocence On A Dying Day

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    Innocence On A Dying Day
    Attention please,
    A moment of silence
    On this dying day
    The sweet innocent girl
    With that sweet look on her face
    Will die from a heartache

    Smile if you will
    Just know,
    That when she returns
    You'll be the one to be killed
    Pathetic as it may sound
    But that sweet look
    On the sweet innocent girl
    Will sour just as a flower will wilt

    So attention please,
    A moment of silence
    On this dying day
    Because that girl
    Whose innocence you stole
    She's returning again
    Seeking revenge

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    Footprints2002 commented on Innocence On A Dying Day

    03-12-2009

    Yes it is wonderful to get someones attention as they read you work i just had to add it to my favorites.
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    Jolly commented on Innocence On A Dying Day

    11-16-2008

    Very enjoyable. Calling the reader to attention adds a grandiose flavor to it in a sense.
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