It is just not happening

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    I have hopes just as everybody else does.

    It is just not happening
    I've always thought that life was just not real enough for me.
    I thought that there must be more fantasy to life.
    When I discovered that this is as real as life is going to get and that there is no fantasy to life, I was torn apart.
    Now, for me the closest thing that I can get to as a fantasy is dreaming.
    Now I know that what i was hoping for just isn't going to happen.

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    bforibus commented on It is just not happening

    02-07-2010

    this poem, although without rhyme, has such a beautiful simple melody. the story behind it, is o so good and i am familiar with the emotion, o so well. great job on this one
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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