Join me

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  • Death
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  • Loss
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  • Lost Love

    Join me

     Baby, Join me in heaven.
    I will be waiting for your heart to beat it's last beat.
    I will be waiting for the color and warmpth to leave your body.
    I will be waiting for the last scream to leave your mouth.
    I will be waiting for you to breathe your last breath.
    I will be waiting for you.

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    smoothdame commented on Join me

    12-01-2010

    I like this poem. I like the sense of longing to be reunited with a love that was lost good job.
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    Maxsbabyforever

    12/01/2010

    Thanks, I wanted to tell what i feel like when i want the one who got taken too soon.....

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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