JUDGEMENT

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    Never forget what a beautiful person lies within yourself, you are perfect in GODs eyes.

    JUDGEMENT

    A fake smile placed upon a face that hides the deepest pain . As life gets a little bit easier the inside still overfloods with tears of nightmares played as movies like flashbacks in increments of how I was not good enough. Why do we down us so?GOD says we have no right to judge, this is true but the toughest judges we have are ourself. Most living beings see nothing wrong with you, but you go on believing you are a nothing a nobody in a judgemental world of high expectations. Perfection can never be reached but our generations instill in us that we should always be winners , failure is not an option. So where does one stand when they are a failure at everything. How will these drones overcome the images and instillments burned into their skull of what "your life should be" according to society? Does it ever end or do we continue to suffer as some kind of punishment. Why should we look , act, or talk a certain way nobodys perfect! These things hurt us so bad, we all hide who we are, afraid someone will judge us, but its our own mind that sees us as a disgrace.

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    sewelli54 commented on JUDGEMENT

    02-07-2010

    Your words ring home and are very true, we all judge ourselves and put labels on other people, but yet its what lies in your heart and soul that counts, the mind is a powerful thing which can destroy you or make you, but the spitit in us all will be the final judge
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    scarr8045

    02/11/2010

    thank you for the comment. I was raised in an enviornment that always told me I would never succeed or be worth anything and for a long time I believed it but then I realized I am a poet I also write stories that would make stephen king seem like a fairy tale. I am a great artist also I just need a chance to be heard and my work seen. Thank you agian.

    cmlestrade commented on JUDGEMENT

    02-05-2010

    I will tell you a little story about myself. I was in Boston and needed a job badly. One of the qualifications of the job was that you could not be judgemental of the clients. My future boss asked me if I was and I told the biggest lie saying I was the most liberal thinker around. I was the most judgemental creature I knew. I saw broken and battered children,children of alcholics,crack addicts and downright deadbeats. I had no compassion for these parents. I thought they all should be reported to CPS; however Bit by bit I began to focus on resolving the problem and not being a judge. Then I began to judge myself and as I learned more about the sadness of life's circumstance I became my harshest critic. Who was I to judge anyone? I had no right to even judge myself but as you say we do. I tried to focus on correcting all the negatives with positive actions. I thought of all the things I had done that could have been judged by the greatest judge of all; yet, were forgiven. Society does burns that be perfect image into our brains but we are perfect in his eyes. We forget that a lot your lovely poem was a good reminder for me.
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    scarr8045

    02/11/2010

    A lot of be judged me through out my years Im overweight and always have been. people look at us like all we do is eat contantly and I dont Im lucky if I get to eat anything during the day, but I have hyperthyroidism. My daughter gets tormented every day because people teach there children that bieng fat is ugly and disgusting, so they pick on kids. My daughter is 5ft 8 115lbs and is 10 years old she has hyperthyroidism , heart mur mur also. everyday she amazes me because she is the top of the class is in national honer society. people shouldnt judge, get to know them or there history first. The kids were so mean to me because iI was fat that I held a 9mm to my head when I was 13 but luckly didnt do it. It hurts to be judged. Thank you for the comment and for listening. remember you can be friends with the whole football team and it will get you nowhere but be friends with one geek and they can give you the world!!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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