KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

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    KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

    I don’t need a knight in shining armor

                I’m no princess on a throne

    I don’t need a dragon slayer

                I’ve slain plenty dragons on my own.

     

    What I need, is someone to talk to

                when the working day is done.

    Someone to share a dream with,

                maybe a daughter or a son.

     

    I don’t need a crown of diamonds,

                just a little band of gold

    and when the winter years are upon us,

                someone’s loving hand to hold.

     

    I don’t need a knight in shining armor,

                Just a little band of gold

    And when the winter years are upon us

                Your loving hand to hold.

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    countrypoet commented on KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

    01-18-2010

    Your strong spirit and loving nature will at the right moment in time attract the right man and bring you the love that you seek. I love this very powerful and romantic poem.Thank you for sharing it. Terry
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    magicmanzz commented on KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

    11-07-2009

    patricia damn oops i mean darn u hit me right between the eyes with this one my fav out of all we must be related you see things the way i do ty so much ty so much i'm speechless and believe me thats not an easy thing to do
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    SpiritSong commented on KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

    07-31-2009

    I sooo love this Patrica...another 10 for me and a fav. Yes I slain a few of those dragons myself...but I must admit, it warms me to the core to have my knight all ashinin in that loyal and faithful armor as well;)! Thanks Pat...you said it all so well. Love the last two lines and that dragon slayer line as well as the others..great courage and desire for a life companion plus independence shown here..Thank you Patrica..have a great evening.."SpiritSong"
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    Hampton commented on KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

    07-26-2009

    This poem reflects the feelings of a multitude of people who find themselves staring lonliness in the face. Nice.
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    scrye commented on KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR

    07-01-2009

    I liked this poem although I truely believe that sometimes ones best company is themselves. You have a unique flow to your words and really like reading your work. Good job.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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