lies

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    lies

    Everything you said was a lie
    Nothing you did meant anything
    Now i feel as if i want to die
    For being so foolish

    You were everything to me
    I really believed you were real
    You made me feel like i was set free
    But then i found out you were a fake

    What did i do to deserve this?
    I cant even hate you
    It annoys me how its you i miss
    I cant let you go

    I thought you actually cared
    The only person who did
    I thought we were paired
    But it was never real

    How did i get it all so wrong?
    I never thought you would lie
    You pretended for so long
    and i never even knew

    You have put me back in my place
    I don't know what to do
    I am the hated one of the human race
    What did i ever do wrong?

    This isnt the first time that this has happened
    Why didn't i ever learn?
    My whole meaning has been flattened
    No one cares about me

    I have been in pain for so long
    And kept it all inside
    You made me feel like i belong
    But it looks like i never will

    I feel so betrayed
    I really did trust you
    You have only caused me to go back to my blade
    It will never be the same

    But i love you, i really do
    But you have made me so empty
    I have now with drew
    From this evil world

    I will never let this happen again
    I have now learnt my lesson
    I have never felt so much pain
    I cant save myself

    Everything you said was a lie
    Nothing you did meant anything
    Now i feel as if i want to die
    For being so foolish

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    lilvicki commented on lies

    01-26-2010

    Wow, so real......the truth behind some pain full love full of lies....love it!!

    GeoffreyMalloy commented on lies

    05-24-2009

    Now this had a nice length to it, which made it all the more pleasant to read, and again, the truth within and the emotion shared was well worth the find and time to read. };y

    mewmom commented on lies

    03-18-2009

    You express yourself very well and make the reader feel your pain. Don't try so hard on the rhymes, free yourself a little. Try internal or slant rhymes.

    randy commented on lies

    03-17-2009

    SAD POEM SORRY FOR THE HURT BUT IT GOES AWAY IN TIME JUST REMEMBER NOT ALL MEN ARE THAT WAY

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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