LIGHT IN DARKNESS

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LIGHT IN DARKNESS

I reminisce into someone whom I've never seen

And tears falling coz' of you I've never been.

Thinking of the last moment we've talked..

I wanted to go with you and walk.

 

Every night of romance that turn into praised.

Desiring into your arms that would raise.

Now love is not about vision,

But love is all about mission

 

When could i give a thousand sweets?

If i could only saw you under my sheets?

I'm dismayed of my unmoved presence.

But this rebellious is not good for innocence.

And when  can i see you?

If everybody forbids? 

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Phoenix9 commented on LIGHT IN DARKNESS

07-25-2009

well meant and nice form, you are very talented buut need to watch spelling

joyciefruit

07/27/2009

thanks.. but what did i mispelled? :D

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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