look at it

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    look at it
    dreams a lost young petal. wondering souls. i see the dream you seek. follow me please, if you dare.the dream is coming. for u and me. i return by your side with a heart in my hand. it its like a bright fire dancing. to the slow music turning. my heart as smooth as ivory. has turned to lonely sulfur.i retire my heart to you. love me because i love you.

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    CdeM commented on look at it

    02-26-2009

    Beautiful, both in sentiment and syllable...
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    clown commented on look at it

    02-11-2009

    very nice
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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