looking back

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    for the times when we need it most the exspectations and excitement lost and expressions given are the joys shared when people come together and the bliss it made us feel but the sadness when it had to end

    looking back

      looking back is all i see
    one faded little christmas tree
    memories of things I did not know
    were the presents I had to show

    Gifts given were all in fun
    all wrapped neatly one by one
    Ghost of shadows in the past
    were things tattered that did not last

    excitement rose to an even pitch
    people dancing together without a hitch
    peering eyes spied to get one glance
    of Reindeer hoofs as they seemed to dance

    one more thing brings to mind
    giving is better you will find
    remember the times we made a fuss
    not shared by one but all of us

    the taste of the first snow flake
    reminds me of snowmen we used to make
    before i drift off and sigh
    brings a feeling and tear to my eye

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    sherry122 commented on looking back

    04-27-2010

    Time flies faster then the wind, the past becomes 'memories in the present'. Nice rimes, perfectly put together.;)
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