LOOSING

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    I JUST HAD SOMEONE I TRUSTED COME IN MY HOME AND TAKE EVERYTHING I HAD...

    LOOSING

    I HAVE THE ODD FEELING THAT NO MATTER WHAT I DO AM GOING TO CONTINUE MY LIFE IN A CERTAIN BLAZE BURNING WITHIN WITH EVERY THOUGHT AND EVERY FEELING I KNOW AM LOOSING....

    I HAVE THE WEIRD NEED OF TELLING YOU TODAY I LOVE YOU FOR TOMORROW IS NOT GUARANTEED AND IF I DONT WAKE UP I WANT YOU TO KNOW I LOVED YOU AND I KNOW AM LOOSING YOU....

    I HAVE A WICKED HEART AND A MIND OF MY OWN I LET NO ONE IN AND I NEED NO ONE AT ALL I LIVE TO LIVE LOVE TO LOVE AND EVERYTIME I GET HURT I KNOW AM LOOSING....

    I HAVE HAD I HAVE LOST I HAVE NEED I HAVE WANT AND I HAVE BEING THE CHILD OF A NO ONE THE LOVE A NONE THE FEEL OF A HEART WITH NO HOPE AND EVERYTHING I DO PREPARES ME TO ACCEPT THE FACT THAT AM LOOSING.....


                                                           LOOSING.....

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    starfox115 commented on LOOSING

    02-16-2010

    love what you say shan. poetry is shortened sentences haveing the same meaning using literary devices. youll get better.

    Shan commented on LOOSING

    06-28-2009

    "I HAVE THE WEIRD NEED OF TELLING YOU TODAY I LOVE YOU FOR TOMORROW IS NOT GUARANTEED AND IF I DONT WAKE UP I WANT YOU TO KNOW I LOVED YOU " Good thought. it will be bvetter if u present it in more poetic manner... keep going....

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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