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    lOSS

    It comes and goes
    from time to time
    the pain I feel and
    loss inside.

    No longer the same
    as once was
    someThing came out
    and someone stayed.

    I feel I've lost a part
    of myself;changed I am.

    Lost and confused
    I'm a prisoner in my own body.

    Where is my direction, my focus
    what happens from here?

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    sherry122 commented on lOSS

    05-13-2009

    Nicely written poem. You should learn to love and appreciate yourself, this way you won’t see yourself as a prisoner in your own body, but as someone that’s worth a lot and capable to make a difference in this world. You learn from your past experiences and move further in live. So you shouldn’t be seeing your past as a loss, but more as a profit. Stop focusing on your past, this way you’re loosing a lot of positive directions from your present moment. “Let us not look back in anger or

    aggieprof commented on lOSS

    03-23-2009

    I like the 1st stanza. Has a nice beat.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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