Lost in your world.

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  • Inspirational

    Poem Commentary

    It reflects being trapped by my own emotions.. Bein emotionally dependent to someone that is bad for you.
    C.A. Is my christina Aguilera C.D. I think that it is a great cd about finding your own inner strength. I need it when i'm down.

    Lost in your world.

      I'm lost in your world, I cant find my way home. Whats's the magic phrase? Where are my special shoes? This world has decieved me. It showed me beautiful things to lure me in. I was lured in like a fish on a hook and now I'm hooked.

    Where is the emergency exit. Im lost in your world and it's an emergency. I'm bout to lose my mind, or what's left of it. Am I being confined? The windows are all bullet proof.
    The doors are all locked.

    The hallways are all long, there is no escape.
    Every door that is open only leades me back to you
    That's how I know that I am not going the right way
    How many have been trapped before me
    Did they ever break free?
    And how am I suspected to survive without my C.A. stripped c.d.?

    The pressure is getting the best of me..
    Stop tyring to brainwash me and turn me into what you want me to be
    Most of the doors are locked.. But I see ONE
    When I noticed it was open I decided to run
    The closer I get i'm shocked by what I see, a mirror in the doorway..
    The only one that have me trapped is me.
      

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    storyweaver commented on Lost in your world.

    01-30-2010

    WOW. This is an amazing poem. Very deep and well written. The imagery is something I could never accomplish as well as you did.
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    1990lh commented on Lost in your world.

    09-16-2009

    wow great poem very deep piece i luv the ending that myfavorite part "The closer I get i'm shocked by what I see, a mirror in the doorway.. The only one that have me trapped is me" beaitful those wprds are perfect
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    Kdaddy commented on Lost in your world.

    09-13-2009

    Wow! Powerful imagery of a crazed mind trying to free itself. I enjoyed reading this one. Good job!
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    Crush commented on Lost in your world.

    09-13-2009

    wow...this is a fabulous poem. i was so frightened for you and quite sad, however, you reaslised in he end that you are the author of your own fate and that makes all the difference in living in this world. wonderful, wonderful work here. 10
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