Lost Life Found

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    Lost Life Found

    Emotions iced over due to numerous good-byes
    Producing stone in the heart and dust in the eyes
    Who is this lad adrift on the swing?
    Abandoned by both who vowed with the ring
    Cast in a spell of the sorcerer's kind
    Sealing his fate by corrupting his mind
    Sailing on course according to text
    Life is but lost when the dungeon is next
    The hiding of fear is the game now at hand
    While surviving a cell transforms to a man
    He opened a book and beheld the words breathing
    Weilding this sword brought life a new meaning
    From deep in the pit to heights chosen to stand
    He marvels the view and reflects to his clan

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    angelwinged4u commented on Lost Life Found

    10-20-2009

    my kind of poem...deep..but can u understand some of my depth in poetry?

    Maleficent commented on Lost Life Found

    10-06-2009

    This is really well written...It shows depth of introspection... And I always love a good rhyme! Great write! ~ ☮

    hightower92277 commented on Lost Life Found

    09-15-2009

    wow, thats deep and really well written,I like it

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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