lost

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    yep thats why im always smiling and no matter what im always happy. i hide sadness behind the smiling mask that wont come off unless im crying from being bottled up.

    lost

    Lost in dark depression
    Not knowing where to turn
    I opened the windows to my soul
    To see what I could learn
    I swept up the depression
    Scrubbed the sadness and the hurt
    I put it all in trash bags
    And set them by the curb
    I found stashed in a corner
    Tucked high upon a shelf
    A treasure chest of knowledge
    That I could love myself
    And wherever my future takes me
    I know that I will win
    Because I opened the windows to my soul
    And let the light shine in. 

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    weirdlittlekc commented on lost

    05-18-2010

    Fighting depression is hard work. I'm glad you wrote this poem, I know several people who could really use the inspiration in it. Too bad I can't write like that ^.^ -KC

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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