Love Lost

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    Love Lost

    You told me you were different then the rest,
    only to found out that you were just one of the best.

    You said you wanted someone real,
    to tell you exactly how they feel.
    Now i'm trying to find out what's the deal?

    I would look into your eye's to see the real me,
    cause you brought it out.
    with you I had know doubt.

    We started out as friends,
    waiting on your hearts to mend.
    Funny how we talked about what we wanted and needed,
    just to see it was only what you wanted for the time being.

    I guess I filled that empty space,
    only for enough time for someone else to take my place.
    Or was it that I was in someone else place?

    Tired of lie's and games.
    Knowning that it's one in the same.
    I don't blame you it's shame on me.
    I let you touch apart of me,
    That I had on lock and key.

    But it's fine no love lost,
    I know in time our paths will cross.
    Then you will see the good love you lost.

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    countrypoet commented on Love Lost

    01-03-2010

    Thank you for sharing your feelings in this well written and inspiring poem.When the time is right someone special will come into your life and give you the love that you seek.Keep the faith and keep on writing as you have a wonderful talent for poetry.

    devaamido commented on Love Lost

    06-18-2009

    I really lie this poem & I do understand that it took real guts t write it. I tried one very similar in "Zen Stick". Thanks for posting this poem!

    Romano commented on Love Lost

    06-10-2009

    its hard for a guy to say most of these words and admit that we too cry for that love that we need, most times we are just filling a space and women are too, yet we are all human you filled a void that was needed, you became a friend for a season under one reason. i love the poem

    bforibus commented on Love Lost

    01-02-2009

    definitely a well written emotionally inspiring poem. gud job

    ivecute77 commented on Love Lost

    11-23-2008

    verry well written, great job

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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