Love That was not Said

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  • YinRen
  • is lazing around the house surfing the web cause schools out and have no life.

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This is a poem I got asked to write. If any of you it is about the coupling of axel and roxas from a game called Kingdom Hearts. It goes back and forth between the two. italics is Roxas and underline is Axel. It ends with them both stating somwthing.

Love That was not Said

I do not exist
a nobody who wants more
I joined the organization
of 13
I hold two keys
that I wield
for a cause
that I do not believe in


I have been here
with my companions
so long
then he came
making us thirteen
in total
He was so beautiful
His eyes
were such a pure blue
that just drew me in


I tried to stay away
from all of them
avoiding contact
as best as I could
But he
the dancing flame
with his firey hair
kept coming to me
never leaving me alone
I am afraid
for I am now attached
to him I do believe


He and me
are now friends
we talk
sharing ice cream
but it seems that he wants more


I wish to be normal
having friends
like those three I watch
So I will leave


I follow him
warning that they
would come after him
But all he said
was no one would miss him
As he walked away
I stated to his retreating back
That I would


I ignored him
But those words
He stated to my back
brought chills of joy
to me
It was for the best
I needed to
get away before he relised


He my friend
I wish for him to know
my dear friend
that I


Loved him

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Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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