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    love

    Love, man, its serious, can make u scream out deliriously or make you covet something so ferverously, its like a smile, like a frown, its like a soft passionately given kiss followed by a gaze that deep as an abyss, its like a slap in the face that makes you want to chase, its like sweating palms, heart pounding inside, the observance of a presence, hot flash, its like damn it man you can't let yourself go like this, its like i miss you, it like i hate you dont ever want to see you again, its like why, its like because, its like forever, like i was, its a moment, its a era, its her laugh, the smell of her hair, it him trying to impress u, always wanting your attention look daddy look, that love without a mention, man its deep but very shallow, its confusing, its a battle, its two spirits interlacing(man i dont even know if thats a word) its u, its me, it in a sense originalpoetry, it her, its him, it us, it them, its................ its love

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    baddreams commented on love

    03-17-2009

    nice poem

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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