Love

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    Love

    There was a time you weren't there
    and I was trapped in a darkness
    greiving, cus' life just wasn't fair
    bad luck just would not miss

    Then you walked in the door
    and gave my life new meaning
    I knew I couldnt ask for more
    Cus' now I have you for leaning

    I want you to know this is for you
    cus I cant write about anything more
    So my thoughts of love will have do
    and I know this attempt is very poor

    Because words just can't express
    the way you occupy every thought
    So much that I can hardly even rest
    My finals words? I love you alot.

     

     

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    stever commented on Love

    12-17-2009

    p.s. i wrote some new ones you might want to read

    stever commented on Love

    12-17-2009

    this is a good poem honey,, i hope that all your dreams come true.. an if some dont there are new ones to dream.. love ya dad

    MaxMoto commented on Love

    12-07-2009

    Glad to hear your finding what you needed. Hope all goes well into your future. Try adding a few more details to tie everything together.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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