LOVE=PAIN

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  • Emotional

    LOVE=PAIN

    KEITH SAID IT BEST WITH "DONT CLOSE YOUR EYES".
    WORDS TAKEN FROM MY MOUTH NOUGHING LEFT BUT A SIGH.
    NOT KNOWN YOU HAD SOMEONE ELSE,
    WORDS NEVER TOLD ONLY FELT.
    WHY BABY, WHY DID YOU LEAVE?
    CRYING SO HARD I CANT BREATH.
    WHAT DID I DO TO EARN THIS MUCH PAIN?
    HOW DO I OVER COME THE SHAME?
    EVERYONE KNEW BUT ME,
    LOVE WAS BLIND I COULDNT SEE.
    I NEED NO EYES TO FEEL THE PAIN,
    YOU LOVE ME? THATS WHAT YOU CLAM?

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    dumplin commented on LOVE=PAIN

    10-26-2009

    couple of misspellings and it was rather short, but I feel your pain.
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    purplekisses commented on LOVE=PAIN

    06-18-2009

    omg this is wonderful.. i can relate to this.. great writing..
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    nmedina commented on LOVE=PAIN

    06-18-2009

    OUCH!!! Sounds like you were badly injured while on love duty. Good work, short and bitter sweet.
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    Swann commented on LOVE=PAIN

    06-18-2009

    The poem is very good and relatable. I think that all of us have been there at some point in our lives. One thing I would check is the spelling. I think it may have some part in the contests. Keep up the good work though.
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    TheBoy commented on LOVE=PAIN

    06-02-2009

    Wow , i know how this feels...it was horrible experience indeed, but i am still young and i guess love isnt for me. Keep it up, you have major talent, and i look forward to reading everything you write
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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