Love's Entry

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    Love's Entry

     HAPPINESS:Is a relative term:joy unending, the feeling that heralds your entry into my life.
    PEACE:Is a state of mind:a young doe sleeping oblivious to the dangers of the forest.
    EXCITMENT:my heart doing a tripple flip beat at the thougth of you.
    WISHES:My lips quivering,temperature rising,body shaking,senses reeling,then you give me a kiss; The world stands still.

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    christliked commented on Love's Entry

    11-17-2009

    very nice poem you have a way to tell a story and I enjoyed every word
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    BlaQReign commented on Love's Entry

    10-19-2009

    Love is a many splendid things, and you expressed it well...BlaQ
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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