Mad Person

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  • Anger

    Mad Person

     Agrivation gets to me.
    As well as frustration.

    I can't get rid of the anger,
    It's overwhelming but comforting.

    My soul feels so intense.
    My chest is tender.
    And my heart is awake.

    Im alive inside.
    -All because I can feel emotion.

    Im a mad person.

    Stay the hell away!

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    dksamuri commented on Mad Person

    02-28-2010

    the part that stands out the most to me is the "its overwhelming but comforting", as i kno wat thats like. the anger is always there, under the surface, and it is a comfort because it is always there. i liked this one
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    Rhymer commented on Mad Person

    02-12-2010

    I feel the anger and have been on the brink of insanity from not being able to control the venom inside. 10 from me.
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    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thank you so much. Your comments are always welcome. I appreciate them, especially when there from a good poet.

    mustascheman commented on Mad Person

    02-12-2010

    Yes the feeling is there..but...it seems like you held back. Maybe there could have been more..something else you wanted to say? I don't know, maybe show a deeper expression of the emotion to really let it out! Never hold back. I like this poem, it is short but pointed. Well done!
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    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thank you. I appreciate it. I will achnowledge your comment and use it in future poems, No more holding back,. I promise. Thanks Again.

    JaleesaSoco commented on Mad Person

    02-12-2010

    The lines that wrap this poem and point up for me is, "I'm alive inside. All because I can feel emotion." Feelin' this one.
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    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thanks. I guess you actually have to have the emotion to get the reaction from others where they can actually feel it too.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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