Missing You

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  • Lost Love

    Missing You

    Oh my love
    How I miss you
    Every second, every minute
    I hope to hear from you
    I am subdue
    I want to be with you
    I know you had to go
    I just feel lonely without you
    Here in this space
    I came alive when you showed up
    I ran to you

    I thought we would never part
    Gone were my sorrows
    Gone were my pains
    I want to feel whole again
    I want to be in your arms again
    I am missing you

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    vonnie65 commented on Missing You

    09-27-2009

    Hi Featherrose, I read both of your poems and i just loved them.You are a beautiful writer of poetry.You show such deep,deep emotion which is beautiful.I also show very deep emotion when i write my poetry.Keep up the beautiful work girl. Take care, Vonnie65
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    bforibus commented on Missing You

    09-24-2009

    truly a sad story. i see where ur soul is. it can be a dark place. but hope lines that cloud. gr8 write. full of sadness
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    bluewolf commented on Missing You

    09-17-2009

    Both of your poems convey the loss of love. If I am not being to forward-have you lost someone to mirror the sadness of your poetry? Nice job.
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    Featherrose

    09/18/2009

    oh yes

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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