Moment

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Moment

It is all about the moment…
What the moment says?!
What the moment listens?!
One moment there is happiness
At another there is pain
One moment we are together
At another we separate
One moment sweet memories are filled
At another we feel depressed 'coz we failed
Present moment never know what is in store at the next moment!!
Moments fill up the life!
This life is filled with such moments!!
Come let us live as many moments we can with our loved ones
'Coz you never know if the moments continue to be in your life!
A Moment Lost Can Never Be Brought Back Again!

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MKV commented on Moment

06-03-2009

When you write poem, try to avoid slangs eg : "coz..." Also the word moment involved in many places which makes keeps readers interests away. So make it in a better way.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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