moon and mars

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    moon and mars
    I saw the sun everyday;
    Feeling its warmth blessing to earth.

    I search for you everyday
    Feeling the innocent outlook to life.

    I saw the moon every night;
    Feeling its brightness that touches the earth.

    I search for you every night;
    Feeling the coldness of the earth.

    I never saw your shadow every day;
    but I am yearning for your presence.

    I won't search for you tonight,
    for i am leaving my home-the earth!

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    lonewolf commented on moon and mars

    02-25-2009

    very nicely written.
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    Earthlylove commented on moon and mars

    02-05-2009

    wow that is beautiful.
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    Ron commented on moon and mars

    11-24-2008

    we are here but a moment and in a blink we are gone...cry not for one lost, for they wait for you to come home..
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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