mother

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    Mother
    Mom being your daughter has taught me so much over the years.
    And I'll always remember
    How you've encouraged me to be the best I could be.
    And I want you to
    Know that your own life has been the best example I could have.
    And if anyone would
    say that I'm just like my mother it would make me proud.
    Because I think your
    One of the most wonderful person in the world.

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    rmspoet commented on mother

    04-24-2009

    Always check your spelling. The word "your" ending line 9 should be "you're", a contraction of "you are". Your poem is most sincere. You should write your feelings but never expect automatic transmission of those feelings to anyone else. This is less a poem than a letter to your mom.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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