MOVE ON

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MOVE ON

When your heart is breaking
And you feel like crying
When the pain is swelling
It's hard to keep smiling

Tears would keep falling
Memories may keep coming
And you can't stop thinking
Of the one you've been loving

Just try to be strong
For things do go wrong
But like in a love song
Someone will come along

The heart won't stop beating
Even if it's breaking
You're heart maybe bleeding
But you've got to keep moving

Never stop from searching
For someone who is willing
To give all that you're needing
And keep the fire burning

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arayablue commented on MOVE ON

10-12-2009

Very nice rhyme scheme. Usually having alot of words ending in "ing" could be annoying...but in this poem it makes perfectly good sense and fits just right. And it hits right to the emotion of the heart...because most everyone can identify with a lost love and picking yourself up to receive a new one! Nice job! Araya

Renilyn

03/09/2010

thank you for the comment i appreciate it....

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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