Moving On

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    Moving On

    I did think of you today,

    let the noise of the world

    drown.

    Allowed the quiet to poison you-

    until your face was not so clear,

    a droplet on glass,

    the tiniest hurricane

    that could have been a

    hallucination.

    There may be a sliver of evil

    in the silence,

    but there is happiness too.

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    JaleesaSoco commented on Moving On

    03-20-2010

    Wow, this is nice...subtle and beautiful imagery. Good job.
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    dahlusion commented on Moving On

    12-20-2009

    This piece is a poetic gem on so many levels; its dreamy voice is seductive.
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    BadBadBear commented on Moving On

    11-15-2009

    A well written moving on work you've created. Great write.
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    boomboom56 commented on Moving On

    11-15-2009

    You put the words together well. Letting go is so hard to do. I found myself drifting to the past as I read. Thanks for the memories, good or bad. Hang in there, you're a young beautiful lady and have many a lover to go.
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    Paint1954 commented on Moving On

    11-12-2009

    Hi Kimberly this sounded one of my works, good for you.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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