My Baby

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    My Baby
    My Baby....
    The one who guides me when i cant see.
    The one who gave me a future and made me forget my past.
    The one i can count on.
    The one that will last.
    The one who popped the bubble in which i hide.
    Who kept me out of trouble and by his side.
    The one i love.
    Gods greatest gift from above....
    My Baby

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    theladyz commented on My Baby

    05-17-2009

    Candytina, don't let your emotions trip over cliches on their way out of you. I know you are very young, and of course, love is so overexpressed and hard to put in any other way after you've heard and read so much, but you have an original voice and way of looking at things. Do the same with love poems as you do with other subjects, jump in with both feet.
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    Bethane1978 commented on My Baby

    04-28-2009

    Excellent
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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