My Daddy

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    Sorry this poem doesn't really make any sense i am very tired

    My Daddy

     Me and my mom live without my dad.
    Yes its very hard.

    Dad your the best i love you. 
    A dad who cares about me.
    Does your dad care about you?
    Does my dad care about me?
    Yes he does and hes out there looking out for me. 
     

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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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