MY DARLING DAUGHTER

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    MY DARLING DAUGHTER
    The sun on a
    cloudy day
    makes the pain
    of lossing you
    pass.
    The rainbows
    during a sudden
    rain a pictuer
    you've drew me.
    I miss you
    dearly but know
    you are all
    around me.
    The sun is your
    beautiful face
    smiling at me.
    The rain your
    tears when i am
    sad.
    The wind to chill
    me when i am
    hot.
    You are with
    me everywhere
    I treasuer knowing
    you will never completlly
    leave me my darling
    daughter.

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    optimistic commented on MY DARLING DAUGHTER

    06-20-2009

    I like the verse the rainbows during a sudden rain a picture you've drawn me. that was beautiful it made me think of how special and true your child can be. Good poem
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    lilmommy

    06/23/2009

    thank you very much it one of my best i have ever writin and i wrote it in less in 5 mins

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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