my flower

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my flower

i see a woman as a flower
treat and nurture as we take a shower
i rub her back when it aches
and have her tell me that is all i can take
i wipe her tears when she cries
as we lay there looking at the sky
when she says i'm tired i need some rest
i say go ahead and lay on my chest
because her smile just lights up the place
when i call her beautiful to her face
if you don't know by now
i'm speaking of my wife
and i am glad God gave her to me for life

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danmartyjake1 commented on my flower

12-07-2009

That is a wonderful powerful poem to your wife and she is a lucky lady, too, to have you. God Bless!

Paradice21 commented on my flower

12-07-2009

A Very lovely and sentimental poem!! Nicely written!!

Paolo commented on my flower

07-27-2009

This is a beautiful way to celebrate your love. I feel the same toward my husband, God brought him to me.

scrye commented on my flower

07-22-2009

so absolutely beautiful poem mrpoetry and your wife is just as lucky as you consider yourself to be. BEAUTIFUL is all i can say on this one. Felt all your emotion and the wording was excellently placed. A 10 from me for this one.

SyndriaM commented on my flower

07-21-2009

this is a wonderful poem!! its nice to know that there are still some good men out there and your wife is a very lucky woman.

Mrpoetry

07/21/2009

thank you i do love my wife dearly

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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big bubba's wife (cop in OKC) 0
the worst 0
just another example 3
Abort (I don't think so) 5
the fight of the century 3
you're so special 3
blank face 3
so what I lied (satan's reply) 9
you lied to me 6
KEVIN 3
Drop it 5
Ain't hard to find 3
salvation 3
a warning to the world 3
if i did it 5
GB2 4
rejected 9
the truth 4
walk in the park 8
mistress 9
This Planet 10
RIP HOPEFULLY 6
TUPAC 4
marked for death 6
i found out just in time 5
materialism 7
cant trust him (satan) 4
verses 6
I will see her again 29
part 2 of the cop 17
the cop 24
Faithful 1 14
I Love you everyday 22
So Cheap 42
MV7 11
From The Heart 33
Thank You 20
SUGE 19
It's a fact 24
Predujice 48
Just a Reminder 9
What's Wrong 18
Letter to the president 25
Don't Go There 14
COME TO ME ( JESUS) 13
G.A.Y.S 61
my flower 13
The Lips 14
Mike and Farrah 11
loser 8
power of the womb 17
is it worth it 15
crying alone 18
around my part of town 11
My Divorce Decree (from satan) 19
211 13
Fallen Leaf 8
Brand New Dance 22
Regret 23