My Lil Heaven

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    My Lil Heaven
    I wake up
    and cast beside me
    laying wistfully breathing..
    rests a sleeping beauty.
    I could never fathom such a magnificent moment.
    4 she is all that is, and all that i've ever wanted...
    and i laugh 2 myself
    in jest,
    because God has blessed
    me with one of his finest angels;
    a gem one of a kind,
    reality becomes sublime,
    and in her i finally find,
    what i've been searching 4 all my life...
    she is my soulmate, my 4ever, my eternity
    she is my wife

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    Stormy commented on My Lil Heaven

    02-20-2009

    I know you're trying for some kind of effect, but 2 and 4 are not words. They are numbers. Sorry, but I really hate to see stuff like this in poetry.
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    nbosko commented on My Lil Heaven

    02-18-2009

    I hope she knows how lucky she is. I wrote a poem for my husband as well. Did you get a chance to read it?
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    Goliath

    07/30/2009

    she is actually a person i met in my dreams..i had a beautiful dream where i found a high school sweetheart, married her..and started a life together with her..the dream was so magically intense, that the whole day i would keep sleeping just so i could get back to the dream!lol but to no avail. which poem was it that was about your husband the knight in shining armor one, i really liked that one i thought it paralleled mines.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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