Night Music

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    Night Music
    In darkness – you
    finally sleep – breathing
    softly playing counterpoint
    against my rumbling snore
    A bit of night music…

    Our breath – soul keepers
    Entwine with naked limbs
    And cool flesh
    Made golden by the moonlight

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    Perianpoint commented on Night Music

    07-06-2009

    Very touching! Herein your chosen few, but masterful play of words resounds the essence of pure poetry. The beauty of your poem transcends words. I concur with dalusion and margiekirwin. Thank you for sharing.
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    lightcourier commented on Night Music

    05-03-2009

    Beautiful work. Point and counterpoint. Stirringly played! Thanks!
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    margiekirwin commented on Night Music

    03-08-2009

    I am with dahlusion. Much is spoken in so few words. thanks.
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    sweetcheeks commented on Night Music

    03-06-2009

    Nice poem, very loving
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    dahlusion commented on Night Music

    03-06-2009

    A perfect example of a perfect poem. Screw the rating system, this is a winner from top to bottom, limb to limb.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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