no more tears

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    no more tears

    When everything goes its best, theres always one thing to make a mess.
    You make me so happy that all my troubles go away.
    Then when I think I am doing something that will make you happy, you get all pissed off and I'm back to stage one.
    All I ever wanted for you is to be happy, but in the proccess I am the one who gets hurt. I dont even know if you realize what you have done, but the damage has already be set, so I swallow my pain and go on to try to make you happy.
    I will dry my tears and keep being the perfect one for you. All of that builds up and one day I explode, you dont know whats wrong, so you get pissed, and again its my fault.

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    moonchild commented on no more tears

    02-23-2009

    Very nicely write.

    bforibus commented on no more tears

    02-23-2009

    i like the emotion and feel of it. the colors were sad and dark. loved that, but its a feeling i get when i finish reading that i can't explain. its like getting stuck in the air. while i was falling.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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