Numb

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  • Hurt

    Numb
    Numb

    Worked so hard, for so long
    Now it doesn't count
    Left alone to think of mistakes
    Feeling what's wrong

    And now I can't stand, I can't not fall down
     Did I earn my stripes? Are you proud of me? Did I make my way? Or is this meant to be? I can't even feel, you've got me numbered

    Regretting how I let go
    Putting my trust in an empty heart
    Home is not a haven
    Tearing you apart


    Drama leads to more
    Aching leads to less
    Tried but gave up
    Does that make me a failure?

    Numb, by the syringe of life, Numb cause of the drug of your bull___, No cure, To far gone, you've got me numb.

    Numb, numb, numb

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Numb

    12-04-2009

    I know this feeling that you have described. Well put emotions into eloquent words and imagery. Good Write!
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