One Way Road
Everything feels lostThe world is cold
Death is a dying cost
Our world seems to unfold
The part that hurts the most
Is a one way road
We make a toast
As we carry our one last load.
Tiana Valdez
One Way Road
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The world is cold
Death is a dying cost
Our world seems to unfold
The part that hurts the most
Is a one way road
We make a toast
As we carry our one last load.
Tiana Valdez
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knight4696 commented on One Way Road
02-28-2010
- Knightpoems - I like this - it makes me think. It can mean many different things and fit many situations. Only one spelling error ... "wold" - I assume it is suppose to be "world" - I do not take off points for spelling, but there are many that do. Just thought I'd point it out. Still a nice job. :) Ken
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