One Week

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    One Week

    You came on a Monday and everything was good. You was here on Tuesday and everything went like it should. By Wedensday all the excitement wore down. Thursday, oh what a turn around. Friday seems like a blurr, the cursing, crying, screaming, and shouting, what happened? It had to be the drinking,arguing,yelling and screaming. When I looked for you you're gone. I cried then I just got mad. Why this again? Can you answer my question? NOPE! Is this what I want out of life? Saturday,I sat and waited trying to keeping my mind occupied. Didn't work! Sunday you showed up and said I'm sorry. Is that all it takes? No, you have to prove that will take longer than a week next time. Hopefully there won't be a next time. We'll wait and see It's amazing what happens in a week!

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    wizthom commented on One Week

    02-20-2009

    yes i love the build up for the let down..wizthom

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