Our Time

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    Ever in my heart and soul my love Alexander

    Our Time
    It is our time to be together
    As happy as can be
    Together you and me
    Let the cares of this world fly by
    This is for you and I
    Our time to shine
    You in your tux
    I in  a ivory dress
    We are dressed to impress
    Let us be reunited in harmony
    Like lovers should be
    All these years we wasted
    Our love stood the test of time
    Now thats the best part
    We will never part
    Our love is beautiful
    As the night skies stars
    Ever sparkling and shining
    Come away with me my love.....
    Forevermore we will be one...


     

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    rosebud88 commented on Our Time

    08-01-2013

    We are not together right now ,we have not been in a relationship in many years but my soul still longs for him,I can not forget him
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    AlainMR commented on Our Time

    07-28-2013

    As Tony, my comment is :"how lucky is your man!". Your poem is very beautiful by the passion we feel inside it. Thank you for the pleasure to read it
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    Tony5880 commented on Our Time

    07-28-2013

    That was beautiful I know the feeling, he's a lucky man to have such passion come from that guiding light!
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