Over You (Song)

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  • Lost Love

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    This is actually a song but it can be read as a poem. I wrote this when I realized that the person which whom I "loved," wasn't the right one for me. It was tough but I finally got over him. =) 

    Over You (Song)

    I'm finally over you.
    I missed my dreams,
    And I know they missed me too.
    All those sleepless nights,
    are now in the past.
    I can continue my life,
    following the right path.
    You didn't kill me,
    you only made me stronger.
    I can live my life now,
    knowing that you'll be no longer.
    My head is finally up high,
    And in my view,
    You are no where to be seen.

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    Helios commented on Over You (Song)

    10-11-2009

    Oh Cupid thou art crude... I hope you continue to write and express your emotions in verses.

    lithiumblack commented on Over You (Song)

    10-09-2009

    This is great. Short, direct and to the point, and written with a sense of hope perhaps? You have some talent, so keep writing! I look forward to reading more.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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