Paradise of Serenity

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I know it is short, yet it is one of my favorites. I can see myself on that beach all alone staring out at the ocean. It leaves me with a warm feeling.

Paradise of Serenity

Golden sand under my feet, salt water grasping my gown to my body, an ever lasting sky of peach and lavender, fields of ebony rising and falling, leaves  whirling around me like the wings of an angel. My paradise of serenity.

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DreamChild commented on Paradise of Serenity

05-21-2013

Mom I LOVE YOU! This poem and all the rest sound so amazing just like you

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Whimsicaldream’s Poems (11)

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Left Behind 1
Unlucky In Love 1
Thank You 2
Paradise of Serenity 1
Friendship 2
Walk 2
Looking Into You 0
Time 2
Life Anew 3
Inspiring Young Woman 1
Behind Me 1