People all around me

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    People all around me

    There are people all around me,
    who dont see who i am.

    There are people all around me,
    who dont understand.

    There are people all around me,
    who make me feel like crap.

    There are people all around me,
    oh i wish i could snap.

    There are people all around me,
    who tell me what to do.

    There are people all around me,
    oh i wish they could see.

    There are people all around me,
    its time for them to see the real me.

    There are people all around me,
    who dont see who i am.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on People all around me

    09-26-2009

    nice its repetetive but that is the style you are using. Very well put together and it fits the profile of Poems that realeas a persons true feelings Nice
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    cliftondurant commented on People all around me

    08-15-2009

    sometime the people around you just care about you and love and are concern about you so make good decision in life you be sweet
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    Jayandben commented on People all around me

    08-14-2009

    I really like this one. I feel like it is taking how I feel and falling through your hands onto the paper :)
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    SilverGirl commented on People all around me

    08-13-2009

    Very interesting.. this poem has a nice movement to it. A great message. Keep up the good work hun.. Hugs SG
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    scrye commented on People all around me

    08-13-2009

    Two sides of one whole is a poets best friend sometimes brings out our best work. This was nicely put together and the way you put your words together made for a great image. Keep writing and posting.
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