Picnics in the moonlight..........

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    Picnics in the moonlight..........

    Picnics in the moonlight, 
    A romantic plain to see.
    Daffodils and cold champagne,
    With love to you, from me.

    A limousine awaits us,
    To take us very soon.
    So we can roar into the sky,
    In a big hot air-balloon.

    When all that is over,
    It is you who'll hold the key.
    For the next words I shall say to you, is-
    "Will you marry me?"

    This love I have within me,
    A love which makes me whole.
    A love I wish to share with you,
    You're my very heart and soul.

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    MindNumbing commented on Picnics in the moonlight..........

    09-30-2010

    Simply beautiful, bard... from the title to the very last line. Well done ~ 10 from me :)

    TheScarletbard

    09/30/2010

    thank you very much

    TheScarletbard commented on Picnics in the moonlight..........

    09-08-2010

    Thank you so much my friend...regards from the UK

    MootPoint commented on Picnics in the moonlight..........

    09-08-2010

    Thanks, A 10 from California. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.