PRECIOUS CHILD OF MINE

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    PRECIOUS CHILD OF MINE

     Precious child of mine;
    You try your best to do everything so fine.

    Precious child of mine;
    Does everything right down the line.

    Precious child of mine;
    Is great like the age of wine.

    Precious child of mine;
    Is never the one behind.

    Precious child of mine;
    Helps everyone and leaves their sign.

    Precious child of mine;
    Would never leave their friends hanging from a vine.

    Precious child of mine;
    Thereis only one of a kind.

    mgsouthard64

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    CMarsh commented on PRECIOUS CHILD OF MINE

    09-11-2009

    Very nicely written....I too have children and can relate to this poem. Thank you for sharing your vision and thoughts.
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    mgsouthard64

    09/11/2009

    your very welcome. My two sons, are my life and is my life. if it wasn't for them i would of been gone a long time ago. It is hard being a single parent trying to raise them, then my ex took my youngest away when i was down and out with a health problem. my life is still complete because i know deep down inside my sons know i really care for them.

    MrGee commented on PRECIOUS CHILD OF MINE

    09-11-2009

    Indeed, a very nice poem. It has excellent rhymn and rhythmn. And you make use of metaphors,which, I believe is necessary for writing poems. I especially like the verse - Precious child of mine; would never leave their friends hanging from a vine. You have a good comprehension of writing poems. Keep up the good work. Also, you may find my poem entitled -Nefer- to be a worthwhile read.
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    mgsouthard64

    09/11/2009

    I want to thank you so much for your comment that really makes me feel good about myself. It is a long story about the poem precious child of mine. It pertains to my youngest son, william

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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