"Angel with no name"

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"Angel with no name"

I walked with my friends through a tunnel one day,

We were young and restless and surely at play,

From out of nowhere, came the sound of a train,

No where to go, then saved by an angel with no name.

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Tempestlady commented on "Angel with no name"

08-01-2009

I loved it. Magic, and mystery, and danger all in four lines. Good work...

StandingBear commented on "Angel with no name"

07-31-2009

A well written work relating the pickle you were in and the angel with no name coming to the rescue. Great write.

tsgirl commented on "Angel with no name"

07-14-2009

nice poem caoimhe, I give you a 10 because you can tell it is something that actually happened to you because you said it to well about the angel with no name , you were able to recognize God's grace. amen 1 luv

Caoimhe

07/31/2009

Thank you and God Bless You. I'm getting in the groove again to write, been very busy. I have alot of inspiration.

kdavidscott1 commented on "Angel with no name"

07-13-2009

That is a nice poem - it's truly amazing how we are saved by the grace of God in a moments notice.. KDS

Caoimhe

07/14/2009

This really happened to me when I was a teenager. Thanks for liking it. I am going to post more soon, I have not had time, I have 4 yr. old twins!!

Phoenix9 commented on "Angel with no name"

07-13-2009

short and cute, do you have more please........................

Caoimhe

07/14/2009

Haven't had time to work on any. I do have about 20 from yrs. ago. I will get to them soon, and new ones too, thanks.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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