"I CAN'T BELIEVE" , MAY 26, 2009

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    "I CAN'T BELIEVE" , MAY 26, 2009

    I can't believe I let a guy like you,
    Come into my life.
    Not knowing what you were about and,
    What your intentions were.
    I can't believe I sat here and listened to everything,
    You said to me when I had my doubts.
    I knew you were to good to be true but like a,
    Stubborn Sagattirus I couldn't figure it out.
    I should have known better to have stucken around.
    I knew somewhere along the line a fine guy like you,
    Was emotionally bonded had a chick.
    But I was a fool so binded.
    I couldn't believe all this happened but now i know better.

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    EditUndO commented on "I CAN'T BELIEVE" , MAY 26, 2009

    12-27-2009

    8th line was my favorite, i have friends who are Sagittariuses and they are stubborn as well. very good job.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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