"Rainbow of love"

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    "Rainbow of love"

                         I wake every morning with the sun shinning
                    so bright. looking forward to the day without a cloud
                    insight. So much time to think! my thoughts are always
                     of you.!! Will we sing! will we dance! will dance! Will make
                     romance,! Or will we sing the blues!

                     Oh if I had a wishing well the choices I would make.
                      We would drive among the contry with you sitting by
                      myside, enjoying the gift of life. Although we are not
                      married I feel you are my wife.

                      We had our good times we had our bad. When I was 
                       happy you were sad! Our timing was the worst part
                      of our lives

                      You had many things you wanted to say but the words
                      got stuck along the way, the emotions ruled the part.
                       It felt like the sky decided to pour! It showered its true
                        feelings it started to roar. As the tears ran down your
                        face

                        What did i do! what did I say!! Can I give you a big hug
                         to make those tears go away! My emotions rumbled!!

                         I wanted to scream!! How can we go from go to bad!
                         I can't believe! We started to walk. To me it was the 
                         walk of shame. I was looking for answers with no one
                         to blame.

                         And all of a sudden she came to a stop, and there was 
                         no fear! Not a tear, not a drop! Her emotions we gone 
                         and fear was replaced. The words 'I'm pregnant sprang
                         from her face!!

                         With my gut in a knot and a smile on my face 
                         "i grabbed her and hugged her and the clouds were 
                          replaced" And all of a sudden a rainbow appered it
                           was "the rainbow of love" look so proud and so clear!
                          
                           

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    shanna951 commented on "Rainbow of love"

    03-23-2011

    this gave me goose bumps through out my whole body

    liddy65 commented on "Rainbow of love"

    03-09-2010

    oh sweetie what a gift you have!! You are so passionate! I LOVE all your poems.Your amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Stryx commented on "Rainbow of love"

    10-11-2009

    One can only wonder what will happen next. A good write

    koolmom0 commented on "Rainbow of love"

    10-07-2009

    I like this, its very sentimentle. Love is both sad and happy, along with other emotions. Good write. Koolmom

    am2anangel commented on "Rainbow of love"

    10-07-2009

    This was a very touching piece; yet with an element of sadness woven within it. you start out so melancholy but end on a high note. I enjoyed your style of this work. very well done.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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