"So I thought"

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  • kitten321
  • is feeling the creative blood coursing through my veins, filling me with my volatile passion.

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So, yeah my first love is now dating my best friend.  Im pissed cause I know he is going to hurt her, though, not as bad as me.  Only because she knows his tricks thanks to what happened to me.  And I swear if he hurts her, I will hurt him.

"So I thought"

Now here I am
Feeling unloved
Feeling scared
Without you to protect me
I scream in despair

Your arm is around her
My lovely caring friend
I ponder why you chose her
Of course
She is beautiful
And
She is not me

I swear if you hurt her
You can consider yourself dead
I may love you
But this is my friend

The person who stayed
When you left
The person who cared if I killed myself
When you would be happy to pull the trigger
So I thought

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

kitten321’s Poems (7)

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